Thursday, 23 April 2009

PAGE 11 Plates 1-4

10 comments:

Rob Davis said...

Snake Pit, hatcheck girl, stiff shirts... I like it.

Panels 2 and 3 work really well, nice sense of a busy club and i love the first sighting of Franny. Very cinematic moment, nicely matched to the text.

Good stuff!

btw, If you want her to feature, for the long or short term, you can put her in the featuring column. Same goes for Loretta and Sam, if anyone wants to insure that Ian doesn't blow them up ;-)

I. N. J. Culbard said...

Excellent work, Dave. And for the record - I don't blow people up. :-)

Faz Choudhury said...

Very nice, panels 2 and 3 are great. Love the Robert Crumb looking bloke in panel 2 and the hair on the lady with him.

And I think I'm going to like Franny.

paulhd said...

Great stuff, Dave. Agree with Faz, looking forward to see Franny develop.

D.TAYLOR said...

This has really opened out the story beautifully Dave. Love what you've done here and look forward to much more!

Dave Shelton said...

You are all very kind.

I'm not really happy with it myself at all. Oh well. Onwards, onwards and better things next time.

Rob Davis said...

With apologies to my wife, my children, my agent, my editors, publishers and other projects.... HUZZAH!!

The show must go on...!

Dave Shelton said...

Good man, Rob. I was beginning to worry I'd killed it.

Rob Davis said...

lol. Lot of busy folk, I think. Just hope I can find time to do it justice.

shane oakley said...

dave - so busy i'm rude! love the look of franny, and you've put a lot of 'life' in the club - good stuff!