Friday, 17 April 2009

1.Page 8 Plates 1-4

11 comments:

I. N. J. Culbard said...

Excellent work, Dave. Very nice.

D.TAYLOR said...

I'm really not happy with it but I think it works in context with the preceding pages, so I'm not too blue.
Cheers Ian.

Rob Davis said...

HUZZAH!!

Rob Davis said...

I like it, Dave. I was hoping that whoever did the fight action did 'something' with it. The idea that Sleepy goes nostalgic (drifting in a slow poetic sleep) when taking a beating fits with how i see him - 'walking through the punches'. Good stuff.

Faz Choudhury said...

I think it's works great, the imagery of what's happening and what he's seeing in his head all at the same time, really, really nice. It's all very expressionist. Sleepy feels no physical pain, it doesn't really bother him anymore, what's hurting him is deep inside.

Rob, are you huzzahed on both Huzzahs now? Ya gutsy get.

D.TAYLOR said...

Then I'm happy! Cheers folks.

Rob Davis said...

I finished the other one. I'm having this one for pudding :-)

Faz Choudhury said...

Sorry Dave, it appears I'm TypoMan today, the last panel has 'quite' instead of 'quiet'.

shane oakley said...

dave - digging them last two panels, the angles have great swooping drama to em. and it's a neat thing you've added to sleepy.

and rob, watch that waistline...

gonna do me a huzzah-ing any day soon...

paulhd said...

Lovely work Dave, and that's one fatal looking femme in the last plate, I don't trust her one bit.

Paul Peart-Smith said...

All that was said above PLUS thelovely rythym of the dialogue too...compelling!