Lovely transition through the first three panels: swirling chaos in the first, still a jarring angle in the second and then the relatively straightforward view of the third. Clever stuff.
Cheers, Paul - Saul Bass was definitely foremost in my mind.
Dave T, who's at the door? Who's at the door?
Dave S - Thank you, exactly what I was going for. I wanted that second panel to kind of look like he'd fallen from the first panel and then hit the bed.
Wicked!! ... great panel flow Fazman. First panel is fab -as paul noted very Saul Bass/Vertigo vibe but particularly reminded me of 'The Time Tunnel' series tunnel thang also - love it when a panel or page tweaks at your fond memories so.
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All good (great, even), but panel 1 is amazing. Real Saul Bass vibe. You da' man.
Yeah, great first pan and your timing for a scene change is spot on!
Lovely transition through the first three panels: swirling chaos in the first, still a jarring angle in the second and then the relatively straightforward view of the third. Clever stuff.
Cheers, Paul - Saul Bass was definitely foremost in my mind.
Dave T, who's at the door? Who's at the door?
Dave S - Thank you, exactly what I was going for. I wanted that second panel to kind of look like he'd fallen from the first panel and then hit the bed.
Wicked!! ... great panel flow Fazman.
First panel is fab -as paul noted very Saul Bass/Vertigo vibe but particularly reminded me of 'The Time Tunnel' series tunnel thang also - love it when a panel or page tweaks at your fond memories so.
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