Thanks all. This design was supposed to save me time, necessity the mother.. and all that. Didn't quite work out that way.
Dave (Morris):The original line was 'she looked like a funeral' which is nowhere near as good.
Shubhajit: Cheers. As for the rib, Sleepy walks through punches without feeling the pain, which suggests he's one of those journeyman fighters who end up doing boxing booths at the fairs - the kind you can hit with a cricket bat and who still stands there unfazed.
And as Ian says - not much you can do with rib injuries anyway. I have a feeling he'll take a few more beatings yet if it means finding out what happened to Rosalie (or whatever her real name is).
rob - though your pictures blow my hat off, gotta compliment you on the 'words' - cool beat and roll to em, punchy and poetic.
and, as someone who recieved a rib-fracturing thump in my youth, other than taking buckets of pain killers, there's little you can do. but, i lay in bed for days, closest i came to 'sleepy'.
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Thickening the plot nicely, Rob. Fanny's expression on the last plate is great, having the faces cenral works brilliantly.
Excellent.
Wonderful. Lovely transitions from panel to panel. Beautifully done.
I love the way you've used the faces there. Also that line - "She looked like a hole in the ground." Marvellous!
Great art, great writing. Love her face last pan.
The change in face from Plates 2 to 3 was excellent.
By the way, our hero seemed to have 'popped' a rib, shouldn't he have taken a quick trip to the hospital before resuming his search?
To be fair - our hero's a boxer and there's not a great deal a hospital can do for rib fractures. He's not out for the count just yet.
Thanks all. This design was supposed to save me time, necessity the mother.. and all that. Didn't quite work out that way.
Dave (Morris):The original line was 'she looked like a funeral' which is nowhere near as good.
Shubhajit: Cheers. As for the rib, Sleepy walks through punches without feeling the pain, which suggests he's one of those journeyman fighters who end up doing boxing booths at the fairs - the kind you can hit with a cricket bat and who still stands there unfazed.
And as Ian says - not much you can do with rib injuries anyway. I have a feeling he'll take a few more beatings yet if it means finding out what happened to Rosalie (or whatever her real name is).
I also really liked: "walks with a bitter twist, speaks fluent snakes and ladders". Noir is so much about both words and visuals.
When's the next page coming? I really hope sooner rather than later...
HUZZAH!!
rob - though your pictures blow my hat off, gotta compliment you on the 'words' - cool beat and roll to em, punchy and poetic.
and, as someone who recieved a rib-fracturing thump in my youth, other than taking buckets of pain killers, there's little you can do. but, i lay in bed for days, closest i came to 'sleepy'.
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