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1. A contributor must acknowledge their turn with a comment on the last submission after which they have 3 days to submit their turn.
2. Scene changes may only occur in plate one of each page. A contributor may take this opportunity to start a new chapter. A new chapter may start no less than 8 pages after the last chapter. A chapter title card must take up one entire plate.
3. A contributor cannot follow directly after their last turn and can only Huzzah once per page.
4. If after 24 hrs no contributor has acknowledged their turn then rule 3 is suspended for that round and any contributor may claim the next plate.
5. Contributors must adhere to the rules of the setting.
2. Scene changes may only occur in plate one of each page. A contributor may take this opportunity to start a new chapter. A new chapter may start no less than 8 pages after the last chapter. A chapter title card must take up one entire plate.
3. A contributor cannot follow directly after their last turn and can only Huzzah once per page.
4. If after 24 hrs no contributor has acknowledged their turn then rule 3 is suspended for that round and any contributor may claim the next plate.
5. Contributors must adhere to the rules of the setting.
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11 comments:
Excellent work, Dave. Very nice.
I'm really not happy with it but I think it works in context with the preceding pages, so I'm not too blue.
Cheers Ian.
HUZZAH!!
I like it, Dave. I was hoping that whoever did the fight action did 'something' with it. The idea that Sleepy goes nostalgic (drifting in a slow poetic sleep) when taking a beating fits with how i see him - 'walking through the punches'. Good stuff.
I think it's works great, the imagery of what's happening and what he's seeing in his head all at the same time, really, really nice. It's all very expressionist. Sleepy feels no physical pain, it doesn't really bother him anymore, what's hurting him is deep inside.
Rob, are you huzzahed on both Huzzahs now? Ya gutsy get.
Then I'm happy! Cheers folks.
I finished the other one. I'm having this one for pudding :-)
Sorry Dave, it appears I'm TypoMan today, the last panel has 'quite' instead of 'quiet'.
dave - digging them last two panels, the angles have great swooping drama to em. and it's a neat thing you've added to sleepy.
and rob, watch that waistline...
gonna do me a huzzah-ing any day soon...
Lovely work Dave, and that's one fatal looking femme in the last plate, I don't trust her one bit.
All that was said above PLUS thelovely rythym of the dialogue too...compelling!
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