2 pages, you managed to get them done, top man! I agree with Rob, the body language is well observed, that first panel of 'Ratola' and the way he's holding his drink - very nice. Second panel's a doozy, great composition.
Love the viewpoint, movement and silence in the first panel of page 7. Enjoyed the dialogue throughout.
It is tempting to Huzzah again but it would be nice to have someone new get stuck in.
1. A contributor must acknowledge their turn with a comment on the last submission after which they have 3 days to submit their turn. 2. Scene changes may only occur in plate one of each page. A contributor may take this opportunity to start a new chapter. A new chapter may start no less than 8 pages after the last chapter. A chapter title card must take up one entire plate. 3. A contributor cannot follow directly after their last turn and can only Huzzah once per page. 4. If after 24 hrs no contributor has acknowledged their turn then rule 3 is suspended for that round and any contributor may claim the next plate. 5. Contributors must adhere to the rules of the setting.
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Some nice artwork and strong body language here, especially in panel one page 6. In fact page 6 is particularly good.
tempted to HUZZAH, but I wanna see someone new have a go.
2 pages, you managed to get them done, top man! I agree with Rob, the body language is well observed, that first panel of 'Ratola' and the way he's holding his drink - very nice. Second panel's a doozy, great composition.
Love the viewpoint, movement and silence in the first panel of page 7. Enjoyed the dialogue throughout.
It is tempting to Huzzah again but it would be nice to have someone new get stuck in.
Excellent work, Paul.
Ditto with the face on plate 1 of page 6. Ditto with the waiting to see if anyone else will have a go. Very tempted.
HUZZAH!!
erm...I mean HUZZAH NOIR!!
Pan one page 7 is a doozy!
paul - they've all beat me to it, lets say i agree with all the praise, but with bells on!
BRAVO!
Thanks fellas, much appreciated.
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