Knock out work, Faz. Robs' right, that last panel's great, I love the slow zoom towards the thug, and the expression of malevolence on his face is perfect.
Thanks guys, it's a lot scrappier than I wanted it to be, there's a bunch of stuff that should have been thought out better, background details interfering with the foreground and not in a good way.
The man in the background in Plate 3 - thats really a subtle yet awesome way of depicting that, well, the international page isn't really what he's interested in. And that cigarette casually dangling from his mouth - classic noir!
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This is great, Faz. Lovely continuity between the panels. I love that last panel!
Knock out work, Faz. Robs' right, that last panel's great, I love the slow zoom towards the thug, and the expression of malevolence on his face is perfect.
Great page. Great last panel,
Thanks guys, it's a lot scrappier than I wanted it to be, there's a bunch of stuff that should have been thought out better, background details interfering with the foreground and not in a good way.
I'm glad you liked it though.
The man in the background in Plate 3 - thats really a subtle yet awesome way of depicting that, well, the international page isn't really what he's interested in. And that cigarette casually dangling from his mouth - classic noir!
Huzzah!
Classy stuff, Faz. Love the movement through the initial scene and into the shadows.
Bit worried for Fran now though...
Er re-Huzzah! If anyone's keeping score
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