Wednesday, 3 June 2009

CHAPTER 1, PAGE 14, PLATES 1-4

8 comments:

Rob Davis said...

This is great, Faz. Lovely continuity between the panels. I love that last panel!

paulhd said...

Knock out work, Faz. Robs' right, that last panel's great, I love the slow zoom towards the thug, and the expression of malevolence on his face is perfect.

WJC said...

Great page. Great last panel,

Faz Choudhury said...

Thanks guys, it's a lot scrappier than I wanted it to be, there's a bunch of stuff that should have been thought out better, background details interfering with the foreground and not in a good way.

I'm glad you liked it though.

Shubhajit said...

The man in the background in Plate 3 - thats really a subtle yet awesome way of depicting that, well, the international page isn't really what he's interested in. And that cigarette casually dangling from his mouth - classic noir!

Colin Fawcett said...

Huzzah!

Dave Shelton said...

Classy stuff, Faz. Love the movement through the initial scene and into the shadows.

Bit worried for Fran now though...

Colin Fawcett said...

Er re-Huzzah! If anyone's keeping score